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Distasteful by ~OpenMindedEloquence:iconOpenMindedEloquence:

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[Title] Distasteful

I did something
That will never happen
I did something
That will never occur

The devil from hell
That only means well

Won’t you
Won’t you come with me?

I did something
That will never happen
I did something
That will never occur
To you

The angel from above
That only knows love

Won’t you
Won’t you fight with me?

Along my side
A long time ago
Along my side
A long time ago

I let myself go

Won’t you
Won’t you fight with me?

I have my sword
You have your lord
I have my sheath
You have your teeth
Bite my tongue
You have my teeth
Bite my tongue

I taste your power
Now drop your weapons
I will not cower
You'll see what happens

To you

Nothing to discuss
Bite my tongue
I taste your disgust
Bite my tongue

I will not hurt you

All is fair
In my love
And in your war
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Author's Comments

I had a hard time finishing this one.

I really wanted to be more specific with the song, but now I feel that it isn't very necessary and hopefully I am right on that.

As in some of my other lyrics this could have more than one meaning. It depends on the person reading it. You can take the lyrics more literal or metaphorical. If you are curious of my thoughts on these lyrics give me a nice comment saying so. Otherwise I like it even more when you tell me what you think. (Since I'm not always the greatest at clearly expressing my thoughts)

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~GhostOfMystery Jun 16, 2009, 11:43:52 AM
I'm trying to get over the excitement of seeing new work! JEEZ!!
Anyway, the references to the Devil and the Angel. The sword and the Lord sounds like an abstinance reference... I suppose that means I have a dirty mind.

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The angel with her gaze covered held peace in the palm of her left hand and blood in the palm of the right.
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~GhostOfMystery Jun 16, 2009, 11:44:41 AM
I liked the references, wow... I need to proof read my comments.

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The angel with her gaze covered held peace in the palm of her left hand and blood in the palm of the right.
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~OpenMindedEloquence Jun 16, 2009, 2:14:18 PM
Thanks! I edited it just now by adding a few more lines that I wasn't so sure about. Your analysis on this one is very interesting...not at all what was on my mind when writing it. :D

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I'm going to read "The Holy Bible", but it is so hard to start reading something, knowing how much it has fucked up common sense where it isn't even common anymore. My common sense can be messed up enough as it is. But you know what? I trust myself.
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~GhostOfMystery Jun 16, 2009, 10:52:24 PM
Sorry, that's cuz I'm a perverted freak ^^;
I like the additional lines, zones in more...

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The angel with her gaze covered held peace in the palm of her left hand and blood in the palm of the right.
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~IBJumblin Jun 18, 2009, 8:08:28 PM
Jordan!

I love this one, it has attitude


it seems...hm

well like there are two people, perhaps lovers. A weird sort of lovers though, they are polar opposites. And this is..I dont know how to describe it. Part of me thought of it as a challenge to his lover, but at the same time, he was challenging his lover in order to show him how stupid this whole fight would be.

that is my thought anyway

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The melody of mermaids keeps me awake at night.

Can you hear them call?
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